This is a work in progress, and also my first post here. Sorry about any grammar or punctuation mistakes, garaunteed I'll fix them later. Anyways, this is just a little sample of a story I'm working on. Not much YET to get you off on, but a good read til the next part. I hope you all like it and if you do please comment and I'll post the rest, which is when it gets to the real good stuff ;) My posts depend on your comments.
I may have gone to that Chinese restaurant for a bite to eat, but I didn’t want any food. I wanted the only drink that wouldn’t leave me aching and hungry, so I paid no attention to the menu or any of the friends and family I was there with. My eyes and senses had become focused on the one lonely waitress I had noticed.
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